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Allysa
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In an upside-down garden

0 posted 2001-02-23 04:08 PM


You say you care but I know you don't.
You never have, never will.
You can't see what I don't show you,
you can't hear the strange shrill.
You won't care even if I try.
It'll take me to many years.
You can't see them as they fall from my eyes.
All those red colored tears.


I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't.


© Copyright 2001 Allysa - All Rights Reserved
gjam
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1 posted 2001-02-23 06:43 PM


I liked this...to me it represented the worst possible ending of my last post..this is good I liked it alot..
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2 posted 2001-02-23 08:17 PM


oh Allysa
talk to me, ok?


So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

MiseryDivine
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Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh)
3 posted 2001-02-23 10:15 PM


i really liked this....i can relate oh so well....great poem
Jeremy Redinger
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4 posted 2001-02-27 03:34 AM


It hurts, people you care about, but who do not care back. Say it, don't say it, it doesn't matter... Show it. That's what we really want. It's a great poem, and it reflects the way things have been going for me recently. Thank you for writing it.
Allysa
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In an upside-down garden
5 posted 2001-03-08 03:34 PM


sometimes I just scream inside my head "it doesn't matter! it doesn't matter!" because I don't really care what other people think, I'm gonna do whatever I want to do anyways.
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