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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida 
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(repost..they told me it was rather dark..lol ..so here, see what you guys think..  )playing with the devil watching sins grow wild dare him to take your hand for a little while he'll whisper in your ear while he fiendishly steals your soul he'll snatch your heart away just to leave you cold with the blood of a stolen soul dripping slowly from his quill i've watched him sit in laughter while he scribbles the heart to still i am his darkwinged angel dressed in demon black once you find me in your dreams there is no turning back smell me on your skin taste me on your hand i'll be there where he left me you cant go home again... -dgvarner 1-10-01 there is no BEST in a world of INDIVIDUALS... -unknown [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 02-23-2001).] |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Tis a dangerous thing to play with the devil..tis a dark poem, yes it is.. sometimes the darkness has to be brought to the light of day.. to get zapped by the light! Take care.. |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
g, Well, I'd as soon find you in my dreams in something else perhaps, but I guess I wear black and red well enough. I'll look for you there. Dark poems too are fun to do. e |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
It is indeed a dark piece my friend. It may just be me, but I also sense an undertone to this one.....almost playful I guess. Just my thoughts, take care! "I've done all the dumb things"....Paul Kelly |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
SONGBIRD..you saying...i should be ZAPPED!! heh heh...  ok, its a little dark......lol E..how do you wear "demon black"??  thanks for lookin for me in your dreams..! lol EAGLE..yes..i'd say an undertone...playfully BAD! lol  thanks for reading  hugs,gthere is no BEST in a world of INDIVIDUALS... -unknown [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 02-25-2001).] |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
Mmm ... This is good ... Sure glad that u posted it again. |
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Temptress*Moon Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 240Long Island, NY |
Great piece here* Loved it Temptress*Moon I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH- |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Yes it qualifies for a dark piece alright!! Hey, we all dance with the devil once in a while, as long as it's not regularly!! LOL Well done Isis *War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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mystic requiem Member
since 2001-01-26
Posts 144 |
Rather dark? My dear it IS dark. And really super to boot. How often the devil will whisper to us all. A good weaving of thoughts. *thanx*   |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
VERVE, TEMPRESS, ISIS, MYSTIC...thanks so much for your replies!! they mean so much to me  please forgive my group appreciation, as i'm in the middle of moving..!! thanks for reading!!  hugs, g ......*cuss cuss*...truly i am sorry once again for the unintintional bump..i just replied to one i wrote under the name fallen rain...and in my haste forgot to chng the username in this reply.......g [This message has been edited by fallen rain (edited 02-28-2001).] |
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BitterSmoke Member
since 2001-01-02
Posts 54 |
The best trick is when he lets you think you can beat him at his own game. |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
So very true. I compliment you. You've captured how easily and quickly this can happen. And when you finally wake up you're so far gone. "The secret of change is to focus all of your energy, not on fighting the old, but on building the new. Socrates |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
dg, Dark but also delightful. write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- boy howdy! this is way cool!!  dark, yes...but AWESOME!!  down right scary even...lol. remind me to stay on your good side..lol. love and hugs, (from a safe distance) ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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