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moshpit
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since 1999-11-25
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cebu, philippines

0 posted 2001-02-21 06:14 AM


My guitar has six strings
But I only have four lives
One for Mother Land
One for the Father
And another for Myself.
The last one--lost
In the blindness
Of your affection.

© Copyright 2001 guile canencia - All Rights Reserved
Ginners
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since 2000-07-22
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1 posted 2001-02-21 02:35 PM


I really liked this. it was short, but i think it said a lot
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2 posted 2001-02-21 03:35 PM


Great ending!!!

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)



NC
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since 2001-02-20
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3 posted 2001-02-22 12:09 PM


yes, this one does say a lot
short and to the point

dragonpoe
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since 2000-11-12
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Palm Bay, Florida
4 posted 2001-02-22 02:14 PM


short but great! what's that old saying? "less is more." this proves that point. Well done.

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

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