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NC Member
since 2001-02-20
Posts 89 |
a thought slams into pavement but the suicide's unnoticed by the crowd in fact, only a junkie sitting on the curb looks up at me and makes the sign of the cross |
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Swamp¤Faeryie Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 393fairyland....of course;) |
wow this was amazing...like a shock to the brain. It was excellent...sometimes you wonder if anyone else can see what's going on in your head,it makes you notice or at least try to notice what's going on in these other people's heads....no one really knows...very interesting...i've never seen this brought out like this before...loved it. swamp¤ Do i contradict myself?Very well i contradict myself.I contain multitudes.~walt whitman |
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NC Member
since 2001-02-20
Posts 89 |
thanks for taking time to read and comment, swamp glad you liked this! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
NC call me thick, but did the thought commit suicide or was it in reality a suicide that no-one noticed. Just wondering. Anyhow it was a good poem, it made me think. write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. [This message has been edited by Kethry (edited 02-21-2001).] |
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NC Member
since 2001-02-20
Posts 89 |
kethry....it was the thought thanks for taking time to read and comment |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
I second all of the above. This really grabs you. |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
This was really sad... got to me. How true this can be  Take care.~ Tara ~ may you live all the days of your life. -- jonathan swift |
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