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Wobbly Head Bob
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since 2000-05-15
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Virginia, USA

0 posted 2001-02-20 03:00 PM


I want you suffer
I want you naked
Just like no other
can, how you fake it

I want you make me
Reach down and take it
For no mistake see
Thats when I break it

I am I am your man tonight
I will I can't become tonight
You see, but you know not
Your sight
I am I am your man tonight

I want you sustain
I want you reveal
Your heart a black stain
In all that you feel

And I need you tell me
Who's this you cry for
These lies they sell me
These lies you die for

Cursing the darkness at your door
Falling to scabbed knees on your floor
You pray, but you know not
What for
Cursing the darkness at your door

I am I am your man tonight
I will I can't become tonight
You see, but you know not
Your sight
I am I am your man tonight

© Copyright 2001 Wobbly Head Bob - All Rights Reserved
Dopey Dope
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1 posted 2001-02-20 06:22 PM


Nicely done here wobbley!!!!
I liked this a lot. Geesh I wish I could write like you!


I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Kethry
Member Rara Avis
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Victoria Australia
2 posted 2001-02-21 03:32 AM


Good poem! Well done!
Write on
Kethry


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



Wobbly Head Bob
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3 posted 2001-02-21 09:48 AM


Dopey--->Thanks for reading and commenting I can always count on good praise from you!

Kethry--->Thank you for the responce! Write on, I shall!

Xeonox
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4 posted 2001-02-21 03:43 PM


Great work of poetic feelings. I enjoyed the read. I will be looking for more of your work.

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)



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