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G. A. Webb
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since 2000-01-21
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Stanton, California, USA

0 posted 2001-02-19 07:40 PM


Everyday it seems the same
I do my job and play the game
But Tuesdays I see something more
When she passes by my door
I find my mind lost in a whirl
While I think of Tuesday's girl

It's not that very clear to me
But I believe her name to be Shelby
I could be wrong and out of luck
But that's the name found on her truck
She simply seems to be a pearl
The one I call just Tuesday's girl

I really think she is so cute
All dressed up in her business suit
To me she always lends a smile
And says hello with class and style
Then I feel my stress unfurl
As I say hi to Tuesday's girl

I'll put my thoughts down in this rhyme
'Cause I don't see her all the time
But she sees me which is so cool
To ignore that fact I'd be a fool
So I'll write some words and make them swirl
All for one sweet Tuesday's girl

Now in the end I'd like to say
How it's so nice to start the day
With a smile and a wave
While I'm working like a slave
I find my thoughts begin to twirl
All around her, Tuesday's girl

G. A. Webb


Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't


© Copyright 2001 G. A. Webb - All Rights Reserved
mirror man
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1 posted 2001-02-19 10:24 PM


I really like this. I know how you feel. Good work.
G. A. Webb
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Posts 441
Stanton, California, USA
2 posted 2001-02-21 08:46 AM


mirror man: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. Good luck on your "Tuesday's girl". :-)

G

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't


Ginners
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3 posted 2001-02-21 02:47 PM


wondeful write i enjoyed this so much and i liked the title and the whole tuesday thing great idea.
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2001-02-21 03:53 PM


Someone to spice up Tuesdays...how nice...James
Dopey Dope
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5 posted 2001-02-21 05:53 PM


Wow nicely done here.......see I wouldn't have a T-day girl cuz i woulda made my move already. I think you should to. Talk to her!
Nicely done here.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

G. A. Webb
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since 2000-01-21
Posts 441
Stanton, California, USA
6 posted 2001-02-21 09:27 PM


Ginners: Thanks bud! I thought it was an interesting concept when it came to me, so I went with it. At first I didn't think anybody in dakr #3 was going to like it. But I post everything here, so like it or not...here it is. Thanks again! :-

JamesMichael: Ya, when I do see her it sure makes for a more interesting day. Thanks! :-

Dopey_Dope: Don't count me out yet big guy, for nothing is beyond my grasp...lol! See ya dude! :-

G

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't


Songbird
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7 posted 2001-02-22 09:17 AM


Could be that the temporary could become permanent, it wouldn't be the first time it ever happened. Nice read.
Verve
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8 posted 2001-02-23 01:54 AM




Heh ... Really interesting work u have here.
What a lucky girl!
*sighs*

Dopey Dope
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9 posted 2001-02-23 11:17 PM


Haha......yea......that's the way to see it pal!!! You go get her, and once you got her..............well......I think you know what to do next!!!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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