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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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Sunny Queensland

0 posted 2001-02-17 05:43 PM


Is everything in your world a charade?
People see the truth you know!
The falsety you portray,
Will be your undoing don't you know?

Some feel sorry for you,
Then have that sympathy squashed,
When your true self is revealed,
The prior image turns to slosh.

The two most important ones,
Now live a life of fear and distrust,
Waiting for you to turn again,
As their piece of mind just rusts.

Why the charade?
What is it you cannot feel?
For all you portray,
Is lies and thus unreal...


*War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.




[This message has been edited by Isis (edited 02-17-2001).]

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Sven
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1 posted 2001-02-17 08:31 PM


wow. . . I can feel the power in this one. . .

excellent. . .

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Swamp¤Faeryie
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2 posted 2001-02-17 10:31 PM


good one,i really liked this,it was very relevant to life,something we all see everyday

sam


Do i contradict myself?Very well i contradict myself.I contain multitudes.~walt whitman

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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Sunny Queensland
3 posted 2001-02-18 07:01 PM


Thanks guys!

*War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.



Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
4 posted 2003-03-31 04:32 PM


Isis....a piece packed with power!!!! Very nice!!!!  Hope all is well with you!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2003-03-31 04:38 PM


Haven't seen you for awhile Isis.
Life can be a cabaret...James

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