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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738
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Something I wrote in a rush... and decided not to alter. Not one of my better ones... but something is better than nothing, huh?!  ******************************** stunned hit from above spun around turned inside out hey what's that you say? can't hear you as your tears fill my ears spinning churning falling now can't see you where the hell were you anyway? ~ Tara ~ 24th Jan 2001 may you live all the days of your life. -- jonathan swift [This message has been edited by taramw (edited 02-17-2001).] |
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Temptress*Moon Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 240Long Island, NY |
This was actually great*S* Love the spur of the moment poems*S* Temptress*Moon I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH- |
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Swamp¤Faeryie Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 393fairyland....of course;) |
i too love spur of the moment,stream of thought poetry,i find it fascinating. Very interesting this one.....i liked it!! sam Do i contradict myself?Very well i contradict myself.I contain multitudes.~walt whitman |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Spur of the moment pieces can sometimes work and surprise us all, this did!! Perfect example of the chaos and confusion we feel.. Isis *War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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