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Temptress*Moon
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since 2001-01-15
Posts 240
Long Island, NY

0 posted 2001-02-15 11:14 PM



*Things that make you go Hmmm*
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Scrapping the sidewalks with my
Feet, body hunched over aged with
Lost time
The misery of life clouding
Visions.
Not knowing who i am, or how
This life of mine transformed
Memories dancing around me
Hazed in black and grey clouds
Taking form of a spirit
They surround me taking over
Body and mind
Feeling trapped inside this
Withering life form
Waiting to escape,
The sounds of my footsteps
Halt, frozen in time
Why walk on to an empty
Path?
Free me now, save me from Pain
Dropping to my knees giving
Up hope
Let them take me now
Envelope my soul
Replenish it with joy
Burn all the sorrow and despair
Leave my corps to lay
Bring me up to heavens gate
Find me peace, what i have been looking for
Cause you see, there isn't much
More i can take



I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH-


[This message has been edited by Temptress*Moon (edited 02-15-2001).]

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Ginners
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since 2000-07-22
Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey
1 posted 2001-02-15 11:33 PM


temp- I think we share a lot of the same feelings and thoughts, this poem is all too close to how i am feeling right now "Cause you see, there isnt much more i can take" either. i hope you feel better

"I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN
"There is no always forever, just this"-the cure

Temptress*Moon
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since 2001-01-15
Posts 240
Long Island, NY
2 posted 2001-02-18 10:33 PM


Ginners, you have that right! we do share some thoughts in common*S*

Temptress*Moon



I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH-

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