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Temptress*Moon
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since 2001-01-15
Posts 240
Long Island, NY

0 posted 2001-02-14 11:25 PM




Today was the day, When love
Filtered through the air
Bringing sweet sents of roses
And All the tears people would Share
I couldn't help feeling
Lost and alone, today of all
Days i felt it beyond control
Not having you here was hard on
My heart, couldn't stop thinking
Of you, and how we are apart
When love blessed many on this
Blissful day, Saddness and loneliness
Surrounded me instead



I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH-

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since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764
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1 posted 2001-02-15 01:58 AM


Ouch. Lovely poem. I hope it helps to share the poem with us. Keep it up.

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)



Baby G
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since 2001-01-28
Posts 39
Australia
2 posted 2001-02-15 06:06 AM


Beautiful poem, don't be sad, there were millions of us out there without Valentines and we coped right?? Cheer up and keep writing!
Ginners
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since 2000-07-22
Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey
3 posted 2001-02-15 01:29 PM


temp-as always a wonderful write. I know the lonely v-day thing well, but cheer up it won't be that way every year. I hope you can feel a little better

[This message has been edited by Ginners (edited 02-15-2001).]

MiseryDivine
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since 2000-06-13
Posts 114
Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh)
4 posted 2001-02-16 11:54 PM


this was very beautiful...and i know how it feels...cheer up! wonderful write!
Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
5 posted 2001-02-17 06:06 PM


Valentine's Day isn't the only day of the year for love. There should be love in our lives everyday. And it doesn't necessarily have to come from a partner. The love of a friend, family member, or even a pet is better than none.
My V.Day was no picnic either, I think the secret is to make the day special for yourself, instead of waiting or wanting someone else to do it. My girlfriend (who is partnerless) and I got together and we had our Valentine's day doing something special to celebrate the love we have in our friendship. We dared to do something, neither of us thought we were capable of. Now each year on V.Day we can celebrate our friendship and the special almost tribal rite we shared on Feb. 14, 2001.
Maybe you and a special friend could do the same next year?????
Isis

*War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.



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