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For My Valentine... |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio 
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To My Valentine I would hold you and kiss you never let you go i would wine you and dine you my love for you i would show wrap you up in passion my arms pull you tight then i look into your eyes they sparkle like diamonds in the moonlight i have seen the blueridge mountians i have seen the southern skys but nothing matches the beauty of when i look into your eyes you hair is softer then any silk that they could make in the far east you skin is like rosepetals a vision upon which i feast and the most beautiful thing i see in you is that loving and caring heart the thing i fell in love with from the very start so on this day love i proclaim my love for you you are always in my heart no matter what i say or do if you ever need me no matter where you are all you got to do is close your eyes and poof there we are on that south carolina beach together hand and hand walking inbetween the wistful waves just you, me and the sand you deserve only the best a heart like yours is rare when ever i am in your graceful presence all i can so is stare at the angel that the lord has put before me at the heart that i long to touch to whisper into your ear i love you so much i would hold you forever untill the end of time i would do all these things i just wish you were mine... Jesse C. Jaymz True beauty is often hidden in darkness... |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
hey yall. i know i didnt make my usual little comment before the poem but i wanna make this into a card for someone. so i deciced to make my comment here.  this is my attempt at making a very lovley and sweet poem. i know most of my stuff is dark but i thought i would change and show my true heart for once. i hope yall like it tell me what you think.love to all jesse True beauty is often hidden in darkness... |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
Lovely Jesse, be proud of this one. It's a keeper "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very warm and sincere...James |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Very lovely. I think you should write more of these sweet poems. This is one is great. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
sax: *hugs* thank you hun. i am very proud of this one James: thanks. thank you for stoping by dragon: i hope i can write more like this. i know its not dark but oh well. i lvoe it anyways. thank you. love to all jesse True beauty is often hidden in darkness... |
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Baby G Junior Member
since 2001-01-28
Posts 39Australia |
Wow!!!!!!! I'm speechless, ahhh absolutely beautiful poem and if you were to give it to anyone they'd faint in the spot!! Move over lovers here comes Jesse Jaymz!!!! |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
Awww, this was sweet. It would make a sweet card, and i wrote something witht he same title, but yours was better  oh well thats ok  "I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN "There is no always forever, just this"-the cure |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
Baby G: ok now you got me blushing. thank you so much for saying that about me. you are way to sweet. *hugs* thank you soooo much. ginners: i am sure yours was beautuful. and i would love to read it. all i do is write from my heart and i am glad that i can share it with yall and that yall like it. thank you so muchlove you all Jesse  True beauty is often hidden in darkness... |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Any woman I would say would be very pleased to get a poem like that. It is a heart melter I would say. Surprised to find it in here where the lights are turned down a bit but maybe that is what some of us need, (a little romance)..thanks for the read, keep writing, you have a real nack for it. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
and the most beautiful thing i see in you is that loving and caring heart the thing i fell in love with from the very start ------------------------------ this is so sweet jes.. youre such a romantic heart..you should get you butt into a lighter forum for these romantic ventures  ("south carolina beach" huh...? )hugs, g "maybe one day we can turn and face our fears maybe one day we can reach out through our tears..." -a grant [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 02-17-2001).] |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Beautiful Jesse Isis *War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
Songbird: i always post here in dark. this is where my family of friends is and it is my home thank you for liking my writing. and i agree, alittle romance is what all of us need thank youdgvarner: heheh me go into anywhere else?? nawwwww mabey if a romance forum pops up. open moves to fast for this outlaw. i like it in the dark. and yesssss a south carolina beach. myrtle to be exact ehehe. thanks for stoping bymy sweet sister: havnet seen you in a while and thank you for stopping in. *hugs*love you all Jesse True beauty is often hidden in darkness... |
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