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Dark Poetry #3

Fear of Dreaming

wandering
Member

since 2001-01-21

Posts 92

0 posted 2001-02-13 09:38 PM

Twisting, spiraling and spinning
Tornado like dreams cut through sleep
Memories plummet downward
Razor edged
Slicing through dark and night
Dissecting my shadow from myself
Separating my real from my unreal
Releasing my nightmares
To haunt me
Taunt me
I am helpless
Wandering aimlessly
I falter on the edge of light
Only to cover my eyes
And escape back into the pitch of black

lost in thought, found in words.
wanderer

Temptress*Moon
Member

since 2001-01-15

Posts 240
Long Island, NY

1 posted 2001-02-13 10:01 PM

I know that fear

Excellent poem*S*
Temptress*Moon

I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH-

dragonpoe
Senior Member

since 2000-11-12

Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida

2 posted 2001-02-14 05:15 PM

Very well expressed. Enjoyed the read.

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

Ginners
Member

since 2000-07-22

Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey

3 posted 2001-02-15 01:37 PM

i know this feeling well, i have written about it several times, this was very good

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