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Niche
New Member
since 2001-01-13
Posts 2
West Virginia

0 posted 2001-02-13 12:16 PM





Ascending to be
amongst the very breath
the essence of being
that is Her.

Fine mists cling
as chill of night
removes farther
what might give warmth.

The search sustained
a glimmer as daylight nears.
Sounds hope
   In
    That
     Tomorrow
      Brings
       Her.


~Amongst the Stars..Alone..I See Myself~

© Copyright 2001 Rowdy - All Rights Reserved
dragonpoe
Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida
1 posted 2001-02-13 07:57 AM


Very nice. Smooth and sensual. Enjoyed it much.  

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

taramw
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

2 posted 2001-02-15 06:21 AM


Hmmm... lovely indeed A nice image you created. Take care.

~ Tara ~


may you live all the days of your life. -- jonathan swift

Ginners
Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey
3 posted 2001-02-15 01:33 PM


very nice i liked the way it flowed

"I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN
"There is no always forever, just this"-the cure

Temptress*Moon
Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 240
Long Island, NY
4 posted 2001-02-15 11:54 PM


Beautiful...Very nicely written*S*
Temptress*Moon



I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH-

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