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No Sense At All |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland 
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Sitting in my armchair, Thinking about this wine, No one wants to understand why, I'm drinking all the time.. You don't make sense, There is no sense at all. I doubt you'll be here to catch me, When I finally fall. Stars die in the silence, Of my lonely life, Constellations always spinning, spinning, Drowning in my nocturnal strife. Heaven sends me no promises, I can hear your soul's lonely call, It don't make no sense, There is no sense at all. Our broken dreams never really started, They blossomed for a short while, then died, We held each other close, Realising our mistakes as we cried. And still I sit in my old armchair, Thinking about you and this wine, No one cares to understand why, I'm drinking all the time. Do you still feel it? Is your soul still mourning me? You were my sovereign of the spirit too you know, And I'm damned if I can let go! So I dissolve into my fantasy world again, A world of spiritual awakening, Devoid of any pain, But know my heart is always yours for the taking. I see you sitting in your armchair, As I still sit in mine, And no one understands why, We are drinking all the time... CHEERS!!  *War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
we drink to forget. . . to not feel. . . but. . . does it make a difference?? excellent words. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Temptress*Moon Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 240Long Island, NY |
Isis...This was Beautifully written... Temptress*Moon I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH- |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
that never worked for me...I always had the same problem in the morning...sometimes I drink to relax and sometimes to have a good time...my favorite is cognac...James |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Hey I'm not ACTUALLY drinking just playing with the feelings Isis *War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sweetie, Well you played wonderfully with the imagery in this one, and I know those feelings can be profoundly heavy and make no sense at all as to why someone would have to edure them in the first place. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks Cerenity you are spot on and understand perfectly  Isis *War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
I could really relate to this one. In fact, a lot of feelings it brought... such pain it evoked... also longing... and regret. Thank you for sharing such a truly profound piece of writing. may you live all the days of your life. -- jonathan swift |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I agree, you brought the feelings out so well. A little too close to home for me but well done! "I've done all the dumb things"....Paul Kelly |
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