Dark Poetry #3 |
On our special day... |
Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
hey yall well its been a very long time since i posted anything new. been writing just not posting but this one is for my mom. see on febuary 14 1986 she got custidy of me and it changed my life. so this is our 15th anniversery togegher and i wanted to write this to her as a tribute. tell me what yall think. thanks yall On our special day febuary 14 for some a day romance but for me its a day where my life made its stance see back in 1986 on this very day my mom got custidy of me and changed my life in every way yes it wasnt easy raising 3 kids on her own we didnt always have a house but we always had a home but i wouldnt have changed it for the world no way would i have turned back time i like how i was raised and i think that i came out fine i know that i fight alot with you and that i act like i dont care but that is the farthest from the truth and i do really care so no matter how much we fight no matter what we say or do i wanna say happy anniversry mom and that i love you... Jesse C. Jaymz True beauty is often hidden in darkness... |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Beautiful jess, Mom will love it. And I love you for putting the olive branch forward again after some of the disagreements y'all have had. Bravo!!! Isis *War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Hey! You posted it! Good for you. As I said, I think this is the best so far. Very well said, and lovingly worded. Very good, Jesse. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
my sweet sister: thank you so much for checking in. been a while for me. especialy in dark. thank you for liking it. love ya. dragonpoe: yupppers i posted it after i showed it to you. thank you for saying it was my best. that made me blush thank you for that compliment. *hugs* love you both jesse [This message has been edited by Jesse Jaymz (edited 02-14-2001).] |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Oh jesse....this is so full of love! What a wonderful tribute to her! ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
very nice jes...sometimes its a struggle to get through life..but if the right person/people are there to hang onto in the low times..its all worth the struggle in the end... a very heartfelt peice for your mom hugs, g "maybe one day we can turn and face our fears maybe one day we can reach out through our tears..." -a grant |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
Awww, this was so sweet and i am glad that you have something special with your mom, i am even a little jealous of you |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Awww yea Hun it's great to hear one from you again & like always this one brought yet another tear to my eyes--great work LOVE ELMO <3 |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
Sheri: thank you so much she loved it too dgvarner: couldnt have said it better myself thanks Ginners: why jelous?? thank you for liking my work cant wait to hear form you elmo: thank you. and i am sorry about all those tears i keep brining to you. hehehe dont read my other one i wrote for my valentine. you willl really cry then. thanks for stoping in hun love to all jesse True beauty is often hidden in darkness... |
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