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Jesse Jaymz
Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708
Youngstown, ohio

0 posted 2001-02-12 05:09 PM


hey yall
well its been a very long time since i posted anything new.  been writing just not posting     but this one is for my mom.  see on febuary 14 1986 she got custidy of me and it changed my life.  so this is our 15th anniversery togegher and i wanted to write this to her as a tribute.  tell me what yall think.  thanks yall  

On our special day

febuary 14
for some a day romance
but for me its a day
where my life made its stance
see back in 1986
on this very day
my mom got custidy of me
and changed my life in every way
yes it wasnt easy
raising 3 kids on her own
we didnt always have a house
but we always had a home
but i wouldnt have changed it for the world
no way would i have turned back time
i like how i was raised
and i think that i came out fine
i know that i fight alot with you
and that i act like i dont care
but that is the farthest from the truth
and i do really care
so no matter how much we fight
no matter what we say or do
i wanna say happy anniversry mom
and that i love you...

Jesse C. Jaymz


True beauty is often hidden in darkness...

© Copyright 2001 Jesse Jaymz - All Rights Reserved
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2001-02-12 07:04 PM


Beautiful jess, Mom will love it.  And I love you for putting the olive branch forward again after some of the disagreements y'all have had.  Bravo!!!  
Isis

*War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.



dragonpoe
Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida
2 posted 2001-02-13 08:00 AM


Hey! You posted it! Good for you. As I said, I think this is the best so far. Very well said, and lovingly worded. Very good, Jesse.

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

Jesse Jaymz
Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708
Youngstown, ohio
3 posted 2001-02-13 12:27 PM


my sweet sister: thank you so much for checking in. been a while for me. especialy in dark. thank you for liking it. love ya.

dragonpoe: yupppers i posted it after i showed it to you. thank you for saying it was my best. that made me blush thank you for that compliment. *hugs*

love you both

jesse




[This message has been edited by Jesse Jaymz (edited 02-14-2001).]

Irie
Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493
Washington State
4 posted 2001-02-13 11:33 PM


Oh jesse....this is so full of love!
What a wonderful tribute to her!



~Sheri

"The things that come to those that wait may be the things
left by those who got there first"



dgvarner
Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
5 posted 2001-02-17 11:11 PM


very nice jes...sometimes its a struggle to get through life..but if the right person/people are there to hang onto in the low times..its all worth the struggle in the end...

a very heartfelt peice for your mom

hugs, g


"maybe one day
we can turn and face our fears
maybe one day
we can reach out through our tears..."
-a grant

Ginners
Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey
6 posted 2001-02-18 02:26 PM


Awww, this was so sweet and i am glad that you have something special with your mom, i am even a little jealous of you
qtpieelmo
Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
7 posted 2001-02-18 07:09 PM


Awww yea Hun it's great to hear one from you again & like always this one brought yet another tear to my eyes--great work LOVE ELMO <3
Jesse Jaymz
Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708
Youngstown, ohio
8 posted 2001-02-19 02:33 AM


Sheri: thank you so much she loved it too

dgvarner: couldnt have said it better myself thanks

Ginners: why jelous?? thank you for liking my work cant wait to hear form you

elmo: thank you. and i am sorry about all those tears i keep brining to you. hehehe dont read my other one i wrote for my valentine. you willl really cry then. thanks for stoping in hun

love to all
jesse


True beauty is often hidden in darkness...

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