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Temptress*Moon
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since 2001-01-15
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Long Island, NY

0 posted 2001-02-11 11:19 PM




She walks among the crowds
On the Darkend streets in town
She is the Devil, known to herself
But carries the shimmer of an
Angels glow

Taunting with people's emotions
Hurting everyone she comes across
She is the Devil who feeds off the Vulnerable souls of others,

Mezmorized by her angelic features
You are now under her control
Your fate now relies upon the
Devil
But to you, your safe in an
Angels arms





I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH-

© Copyright 2001 Danyel L. Azar - All Rights Reserved
dragonpoe
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since 2000-11-12
Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida
1 posted 2001-02-12 02:11 PM


Interesting concept. I have pictured Death as feminine, never the Devil though. Ooo, thoughts to play with  
Good write

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

Dark Enchantress
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since 1999-07-27
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2 posted 2001-02-12 04:28 PM


As morbid and silly as it sounds, this poem reminds me of myself. Silly perhaps because we all tend to over look the obvious. The obvious being that we are truly not so demonic. But then again...maybe we are...can't help what our own talents are...

Anyway, great poem. Keep it up.


I am no one if not myself.

Angel of Darkness



Temptress*Moon
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since 2001-01-15
Posts 240
Long Island, NY
3 posted 2001-02-12 11:11 PM


Dark...Not so silly for it to remind you of yourself...This is a reflection of me...so i know what you mean..
Temptress*Moon


I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH-

Ginners
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since 2000-07-22
Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey
4 posted 2001-02-13 09:44 AM


temp- I really like this great write
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