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Who is it There
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Who is it There |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
Who is it there That's in your dreams Who is it there That calms your screams Who is it there That holds you tight Who is it there With you tonight Who is it there That you love so Who is it there With whom you go Who is it there That takes you away Who is it there I see on this day Who is it there You run to his arms Who is it there That gives you his charms Who is it there While time goes so fast Who is it there That makes your love last Who is it there That touches you so Who is it there I really must know Who is it there This person I see Who is it there Because it's not me G. A. Webb Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't |
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Temptress*Moon Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 240Long Island, NY |
Painfully sad  But so Good*S* TemptressMoon I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH- |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
One poem after another...I feel so much relation to. It's actually a little creepy. But anyway, I love the form. How you explained the subject and then in the last few lines really said boldy, if you will, what you meant as a whole. Wonderful.  I am no one if not myself. Angel of Darkness |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Whoever is there, wouldn't do half the job you could hon, it's her loss... *hugs* You can comfort me instead ok  Isis *War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. [This message has been edited by Isis (edited 02-17-2001).] |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
Temptress*Moon: Thanks T! I'm glad you liked it. :- Dark Enchantress: Thank you so much for your insightful comments. I'm sorry to hear that you can relate with my writing. I'm not stalking you...really...lol! Thanks again! :-) Isis: Thanks Lisa, as always, you put a smile on my face. :- G Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
aww this was so sad and so good thanks for sharing |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I try Isis *War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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