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Dark Poetry #3

Blackend Heart

Temptress*Moon
Member

since 2001-01-15

Posts 240
Long Island, NY

0 posted 2001-02-11 07:14 PM

This blackend heart within Me
Beating rather slow
It's suffering from a painful
Lost, Losing you, My world
My heart is bruised and battered
Covered with deep scares
The pain that ripples through it
Was your love you gave, in which
I lost,
It's to late to mend this withering
Heart, It has lost it's beat for Love
Soon there will be nothing left
But a black hole, where love use to
Live

I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH-

dragonpoe
Senior Member

since 2000-11-12

Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida

1 posted 2001-02-12 02:14 PM

painful and honest. A moving piece, full of feel and pain.

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

2 posted 2001-02-12 04:24 PM

I know where
you're coming from
and it's definitely one
of the hardest things to bare.
So I wish you the best.

As for your poem,
It was a beautiful poem
that showed your feelings clearly
as though they were pouring
out onto the page.
Well done.

I am no one if not myself.

Angel of Darkness

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