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reality query |
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
~~~~~~~~~~~~ Is reality myth? Are we merely a tale being told 'round a fire in timeless shift? Where notions of destiny flicker and spark, where options of winning were blatantly stark and never included as part of the plot. Where decisions of needing or needing not are less than a sliver within the log that burns on the fire. And every quiver of grandiose schemes dissipates in smoke along with the dreams that no one wrote. Can myths be real? ~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
wow!!! i like this a lot. your way with words is astounding. keep sharing So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
Thank you my friend! I thought this one had died a slow death...couldn't figure out if it was from starvation or over-indulgence (on my part, heh heh!) I'm so glad you like it! Lary |
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Baby G Junior Member
since 2001-01-28
Posts 39Australia |
Fantastic write and a greta topic as well, you certainly have a way with words! |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
I liked this very much it was a cool idea and an interesting question  |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Liked this one very much! Got the noggin spinning and thinking. Great write.  With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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Greeneyes617 Member
since 2000-11-22
Posts 329Arkansas |
Wow, that was awesome. I love the way you described it. |
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