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another day (fade...) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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This is my last of incarnations my last chance of soul salvation this is the reason that I came that I might be, forever changed I do not care what I might lose like watching colors fade from bruise and yes the cost is dear to pay the pain to watch another day...fade... simple reasoning is lost balance of the scales of cost I see things a different way-- I live to love another day. and heat of me will melt the frost and fertilize the breed of moss. All that I am, I give away, to gain to watch another day...fade... In this twilight in my mind the peace of darkness hard to find I search for word I long to say watching laughter dance and play... The clock is ticking on the wall- the sun comes up--grows shadow tall. In this rhythm, rock and sway... I weep. I moan. And then I pray- amazed....I birth, another day dismay...with set of sun....I fade... [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 02-10-2001).] |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
k, you and words do dance and play having fertile things to say good to find you here today giving reason now to stay e |
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
This is a joy to read - love your theme, your imagery....especially love those last two lines! Lary |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
the eye in the sky  watching with sigh’s and your butterfly’s of passion cry’s absorbed in smile because every once in a while a star will twinkle like wink with a wrinkle so take breath and sigh it’s the wrinkle of your wink in the corner of your eye i think or is that just pink eye no… it must be the sun reflecting in your butterfly’s |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Wow! This one really gets to me. " I have seen without perceiving I have been another man Let me pierce the realm of glamour So I know just what I am"....Dweller on the Threshold, |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
You grace the Dark beautifully, serenity. Michael  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
e? "giving reason now to stay..." not planning on leaving were we? say it ain't so! thank you my friend...you encourage me even when ya don't know it...  Lary...your reply was a joy to read for ME...thank you so much....(i am SO emotionally needy! )insect...you are the sweetest little imp! I love ya! and thanks. Eagle? thank you so much...I'm always happy to know that you've read my ponderings. Michael...I do owe you a debt of gratitude... You are among the poets here whom I've studied with frank admiration. I'll be eternally grateful for your encouragement. Thank YOU!!! with HUGS to all of my darkly passionate friends! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
OMG Hon, I love this! into my library it goes. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Hey - how did I miss this??? Where was I?? HELLO K! Lol..Karen I love this...wow...blew me quite away hon..  KAll obscurity starts with a danger: |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
beautiful poem.. i really liked this.. the imagery... the way it was written.. great poem keep writing...  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Karen This was absolutely beautiful. This touched my heart and I could relate to your feelings so very well........so sad but so powerful. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this is amazing verse, absolutely wonderful Kathleen Blake |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
awesome poem. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Had to have another read me sista, still love it I do! Maree |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
first of all huge hug because from those words it seems appropriate. now this is a 100% irish hug famed for bringing a smile to faces. This poem seems to run deep i hope i am wrong. powerful writing. Take care. "across the unfair divide |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
simple reasoning is lost balance of the scales of cost I see things a different way-- I live to love another day. and heat of me will melt the frost and fertilize the breed of moss. All that I am, I give away, to gain to watch another day...fade... I love your writing especially lately...*s...Serenity, it was a coincidence that I wrote and posted Another Night's Fade...I hadn't even seen your poem or title..but was working on a dark poem for my *friend*...I apologize if it seems I have taken part of your title...huggss Maureen "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 05-25-2001).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
back for another read, I really enjoyed this, wow Kathleen Blake |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Want to thank everybody for your overwhelming response (and Maree and kathleen, twice) I appreciate your reading as always...so glad you put up with my gloom and doom! Love and Hugs to all! |
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angelbear Member
since 2001-05-22
Posts 139North East, USA |
Time is fleeting...These poem says that and so much more very well. Wonderful work,! I can't control |
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poni Junior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 21Nebraska |
time it trickles away...we must make the most each day...enjoyed this! |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Wow I loved the pictures this painted in my head--u moved me lol--great poem--LOVE ELMO <3 |
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