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Scarlet Lady
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since 2000-02-11
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0 posted 2001-02-07 11:45 PM



V  eering out of control

U  ntil my  course is bent

L  eaving me in a tail spin

N  earer to death

E  ven now at the  door

R  emembering life with you

A  pple of my gleaming eye

B  affled with remorse now

L  eft cut crimson bleeding

E  nough to completely die




[This message has been edited by Scarlet Lady (edited 02-08-2001).]

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wandering
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since 2001-01-21
Posts 92

1 posted 2001-02-08 12:23 PM


Wow! powerful emotions...liked it a lot. says it all.

lost in thought, found in words.
wanderer

EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...
2 posted 2001-02-09 10:46 PM


Excellent!!!

" I have seen without perceiving
I have been another man
Let me pierce the realm of glamour
So I know just what I am"....Dweller on the Threshold,

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