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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
so i had a really bad day and i feel like ****, and no one wants to hear about it and no one cares, i just wanted to get it out, so this may suck i am sorry if it does i am just gonna write what ever comes out.  It seems that from one moment to the next i disappear, Someone new always seems to take my place, In my own mind, In my circle of friends, Somehow I have become unimportant, No one notices my feelings, They don't thake the time to ask how i am doing, I spend each day sitting alone in a dark room, Waiting for someone to call, I used to be at the center, Everyone used to love me, Now i am forgotten, Now i am pushed away, Why? What did I do wrong, ~NOTHING~ Everyone seems to say, With out my friends i have nothing, They are like the family I never had, They filled in all the little gaps, The only person i have left keeps trying, To fix what went wrong, He says they dont hate me and they want me around, But today was just another day, I got blow off one more time, Spent the day crying in my bed, No one cares and no one notices, They can't understand how it feels, I just want to scream, I want my friends back!  "I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN "There is no always forever, just this"-the cure |
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Temptress*Moon Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 240Long Island, NY |
Ginners, I swear we share some things in common....I know the feeling of being alone..and how friends can make you feel when you shut them out...true friends will always care about your feelings...and the ones that dont, don't deserve your company ....so chin up, I'm hear for ya*This actually was an excellent write*S* I felt what you are feeling reading this*S*..... Hugs...Temptress*Moon I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH- |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Oh this is sad. The feeling of being alone. Take the first step. Call your friends. Talk to them. It may help. {{hugs}} |
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wandering Member
since 2001-01-21
Posts 92 |
This was very good...a lot of emotion went into this...very sad...i feel for you...hope things turn out better...best wishes lost in thought, found in words. wanderer |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
It is always good to express your emotions, take care! " I have seen without perceiving I have been another man Let me pierce the realm of glamour So I know just what I am"....Dweller on the Threshold, |
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liqwidnik Junior Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 33Mantua, NJ, USA |
Gin- I don't think that you realize that there are still people that care. matt cares and I care too. You may not care what I think but you do need to realize that I have always cared and that it may not hurt anymore on the outside but the fact that you chose not to be friends with me still hurts me on the inside I miss the friendship we once had and when you are ready to deal and accept that there are people that do care although you may not realize it I'll be there. This was a great poem, I really liked it and could understand what you felt when you wrote this. I hope things get better for you in the future. LV -Nikki- Don't tell me that you love me unless you mean it cuz I might do something crazy like believe you. |
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