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Temptress*Moon
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since 2001-01-15
Posts 240
Long Island, NY

0 posted 2001-02-06 09:32 PM




"Angel" came on the radio
That's when you began to sing to me
On our way to work
Looking deep into my eyes
beyond my battered soul
You made me smile, and giggle
A little
Took me by the hand, Kissed it
Began to sing again
My head lowered, as i shyed away, Smiled and Giggled a little
The boyish look in your eyes swept Me off my feet
The feeling of happiness shown Through, brighter then the sun Could
Just watching you sing and dance a
Little
As i sat and watched and giggled a little
Funny how you bring out the inner
Child in me, which has been locked Away for so long
Thanks, for making me "Giggle" a Little at the worst of times





I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH-


[This message has been edited by Temptress*Moon (edited 02-06-2001).]

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Ginners
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since 2000-07-22
Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey
1 posted 2001-02-07 07:18 PM


temp- i always enjoy your work, you know that so i am not sure what else to say, other then, who is the "you" in this poem, if you dont mind sharing

"I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN
"There is no always forever, just this"-the cure

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2001-02-10 05:05 AM


Very nice...James
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3 posted 2001-02-14 11:06 PM


your way of narrating made me visualize the situation really good
it actually made me smile while reading the poem
good work
keep sharing


So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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