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I go to dark (inspired by krawdad)
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I go to dark (inspired by krawdad) |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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I go to dark (inspired by krawdad) as a child of the light light surrounds me I walk in it then suddenly, without provoke I go to the dark whisk away on the wings of hell to the gloomy shadows the secret palace of grim slave to the sinister master lurking------------licking making love to my will devouring my flesh between his bloody teeth bequeathing numbness chilling my labored breath consuming places not intended for his touch determined I am not his gift He spits me back to earth [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (edited 02-06-2001).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This just "fell" into dark emotion...I loved the metaphors, and the structure--You stride beautifully into dark, helen. Great writing. |
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wandering Member
since 2001-01-21
Posts 92 |
enjoyed the darkness it brings with it, I was quite at home in the gloom lost in thought, found in words. wanderer |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
bbbrrrrr, I can feel a chill, slick_. and hey, you look good in "dark". |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
ty .....I'm glad you liked.....I'll be back to dark again........giggle......helen |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
WOW..this melted from one thing right into the other without a snag... what wonderful writing! will have to look for more from you!  , g"maybe one day we can turn and face our fears maybe one day we can reach out through our tears..." -a grant |
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