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Ginners
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since 2000-07-22
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Mullica Hill, New Jersey

0 posted 2001-02-05 03:01 PM



This about a friend who died 3 years ago, i miss him so much, and my boyfiend at the same time.  it would be like if you took the two of them and put them together.

Memories

Sometimes I can still hear you,
When I fall asleep at night,
I remember the things you used
to whisper in my ears.
I can still feel you holding me,
Telling me it would be okay,
How all my problems would melt away
with your warm touch.
When I look around me,
I can still feel  ou watching,
The way you did just when I thought
that you weren't.
I can hear myself saying,
"It's not your fault',
Knowing it really is but only wanting
to see you stop crying.
When the wind blows outside,
I think I can still smell you,
The warm comfortable smell that made
your hugs all yours,
I remember the fun times,
We always had together,
The way we were best friends forever
I miss that and I miss you.


"I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN
"There is no always forever, just this"-the cure

© Copyright 2001 Gin Leigh - All Rights Reserved
Temptress*Moon
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since 2001-01-15
Posts 240
Long Island, NY
1 posted 2001-02-05 06:20 PM


Gin...this was sad but beautiful...
Love your work!
TemptressMoon



I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH-

Ginners
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since 2000-07-22
Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey
2 posted 2001-02-07 07:24 PM


temp-  youare always so nice to me, thanks for taking the time to say something nice

"I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN
"There is no always forever, just this"-the cure

Ginners
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since 2000-07-22
Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey
3 posted 2001-02-07 07:35 PM


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