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Another 27? a response to 'Another year' (TemptressMoon)
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Another 27? a response to 'Another year' (TemptressMoon) |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597
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Another 27? And will the sadness double when you're fifty-four or will you learn to live a day as never lived before? Mistakes will twice the many sorrows will come in fours you will have cried the limit but do not close the doors. Search each day tomorrow for the feelings you will win there will be that gentler place you'll find some peace within. krawdad 2.05.01 |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Krawdad, well written poem, full of promise for the future write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Temptress*Moon Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 240Long Island, NY |
Krawdad, *S* thanks for that one* Indeed it did put a smile on my face*S* TemptressMoon I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH- |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Geesh!! Try turning 30 in less than 2 months!! LOL Good response here, Kraw!  DkW |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Temptress*, Glad you liked this litle piece. Got to thinking after I did it that I should have asked but when I read your poem it had "response" written all over it so I just sat down and did it. Kethry, Thanks for the read. Glad you think it worked. (I can't tell sometimes) Dark_, Hey, 30's not so bad! Some get better with age you know and you are probably among them. Let me be the first to wish you a Happy 'B' Day. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
good show KRAW! this was a very sweet response to TEMP's poem hugs, g "maybe one day we can turn and face our fears maybe one day we can reach out through our tears..." -a grant |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
I enjoyed this very much great write  |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Full of promise as all future's are, beautifully and sensitively written!! Isis *War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Hey, Krawdad. This reminds me of that Beatles song "When I'm 64" (?) or something like that. Very uplifting. (not that I really need uplifting, you understand). Good work. |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Hey, Krawdad. This reminds me of that Beatles song "When I'm 64" (?) or something like that. Very uplifting. (not that I really need uplifting, you understand). Good work. |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Hey, Krawdad. This reminds me of that Beatles song "When I'm 64" (?) or something like that. Very uplifting. (not that I really need uplifting, you understand). Good work. Oops! Guess what? This thing came out in triplicate. Let's see if it does it again? (heh heh). Rats. It didn't work. [This message has been edited by mirror man (edited 02-19-2001).] |
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