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WhiteKnight Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 83NY |
Gloom Room By WhiteKnight Smoke filled room, Music, of gloom. People waiting, Contemplating, Life, the wife, Nothing but strife. Gloom, doom, Smoke filled room, Having a drink at first, Then another, Trying, to remember, To forget. Why hasn’t it happened yet? Remembering our past, Never letting go, It slipped away so fast, How was I to know, That it was to be so? Drinking another, Trying to forget the other, Life I had. The darkness of this place, Helps to hide my face, So no one can see my fears, No one can see the tears. Across the gloom, I see her standing there, I see her smile, I know that for a while, She will make me forget, But this hasn’t happened yet. |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
ahhhhhhh the things we do to make us forget! Nice piece here and well explained! Mags No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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armanca Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 211Tennessee |
I think each of us in this world takes tenant of this room ... I hope we learn our life lessons in this room and take the wisdom out of it Carman |
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
A sad and lonely cry, with a nicely-phrased atmosphere... Effectively done! Lary |
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mystic requiem Member
since 2001-01-26
Posts 144 |
Super poem. I really enjoyed your thoughts. *thanx*   |
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