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Click
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since 2000-06-11
Posts 202
USA

0 posted 2001-02-04 12:00 PM




Twist and turn,
I find myself again.
But I'm not the same man,
that I was then.

See the jagged edges,
how they dissapear.
The man I will be,
is becoming very clear.

Man of steele?
or diplomatic guise?
Either way,
MYSELF as the prize.

Hoping for the best,
taking what I can.
This time I believe,
I'm the better man.


Click



© Copyright 2001 Click - All Rights Reserved
Baby G
Junior Member
since 2001-01-28
Posts 39
Australia
1 posted 2001-02-04 05:31 AM


I really like your work it's great, what exactly is it that changed you to be a better man?
Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
2 posted 2001-02-04 02:38 PM


*applauds* Very well written, indeed!

Mags

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