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armanca Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 211Tennessee |
Grey Sparkles... like pale thunder While time speaks to kindness in the shower. And briars preach truth like religion to my bare feet. Fresh picked diliriun blossoms today as leaves turn blue in my care. ~Carman~ |
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the day i tried to live Junior Member
since 2001-02-03
Posts 27the seventh circle |
yay carman... pretty good writin', pretty odd, and just pretty  you're a fantastic poet... never will i tire of your work... |
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svandersaar Junior Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 40 |
quote: .cool. Stacey |
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Swamp¤Faeryie Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 393fairyland....of course;) |
this was really creative and kind of...i dunno...weird in a nice coherant connected way,well anyhow i liked it LOTS,those words you used are incredible!! swamp Do i contradict myself?Very well i contradict myself.I contain multitudes.~walt whitman |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done here. Very nice choice of wording.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
I enjoyed this it as odd, but i liked the way it seemed to fit together  "I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN "There is no always forever, just this"-the cure |
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