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Temptress*Moon
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0 posted 2001-02-02 09:07 PM




One night of Mistaken passion
Now forever in our eyes
The both of us, are taken
Buried beyond our lies
This uncontrolable passion
Heats us up inside
Wanting so badly to be with
Each other, Knowing that this
Can Never happen
What is it that we feel?
We know it isn't love
Our Hearts belong to someone else
Is this just Lust?
We confess so much to each other
In our Daily talks
Knowing that this is wrong
But we continue to feel for each Other
Today, You held me close
And that's when i just cried, Telling You how much i Miss him, leaving
Stains of tears on your arms
Confusing? Yes, to both of us
We can't explain what we feel
But we both know that somethings
There, what is it? can someone Explain This sinful feeling i have  

*This is something a friend of mine is going through* can i help her?
No, because i can't understand it myself*




I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH-


[This message has been edited by Temptress*Moon (edited 02-03-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-02-02 11:39 PM


I'm not good at this but let me give it a shot.  Maybe they both really don't love each other, but at the same time still see the things they long for and miss from their true/other realtionship from each other.  Having some similarities may drive you closer to each other, but that doesn't mean that you're both in love.  Well, I'll shut my mouth now for I might not be making any sense

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR



Temptress*Moon
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since 2001-01-15
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2 posted 2001-02-03 12:20 PM


I think that you hit a strong point in this one..one that i couldn't come up with...Thinking that she is in Lust with him..because of her lover's absence   so she needs to lean on him for security...Thanks for your reply*S*
Temptressmoon



I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH-

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