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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
Hello? Is anyone out there? Can you hear me? I feel so lost and alone. I tried, I really did. Now its all coming crashing down. Its all blowing up in my face. Hello? Can somebody point me in the right direction? Does anybody care to help? Does anybody even care? I'm so confused. Help. Please. Hello? Anyone... Why now? Why after I've worked so hard? Do I deserve this? Would anyone deserve this? Hello... P.L.U.R. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Lisa Marie we are out here, we hear your cry.. Isn't it awful when you feel like all your efforts lately have been in vain, and you are no further down the road then when you started? I know the feeling well. But it's up to us to keep the faith, keep plugging away at it, and before we know it, things will 'suddenly be better' Chin up hon  Isis *War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
Such a mournful plea - a great loss is seeping through - hopefully, someone will respond to the cry...perhaps the hand of faith will reach out...hope will circle around again... Lary |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
DJLI, I am here! I have heard you. Email me if you want. Good poem poignant write! write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Oh my!! I too can hear you! And yes sometimes it gets us confused on why things happen to us. But hey never give up!! Keep striving for the better outcome! Mags P.S. We here at DP are always here to help others, sooooooooo grab a name and we'll listen. |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
*sigh* Ah, I was here once, twice, many times over!! Even recently. It feels at times that there is NO one there, doesn't it?? But we have a gift, we can make ourselves heard through our writing. Keep writing. If this is truly heart-upon-paper, I am sure most of us understand the frustration. Get it out, I know I am here, and willing to listen. Good write. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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