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Walter Poe
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787


0 posted 2001-02-02 10:14 AM


Are we in the Fog
or is this another world
in which we are alone
without distraction
without words
no others to hamper
to destroy
or create
to feel
when nothing is felt
to hope
when nothing can help
perhaps this place is all
where we can live unmollested
by reality
by others hopes
and dreams
and just be
perhaps this is future
or far in the past
or maybe the fog rise
and we are us
Again

The very deep did rot: O Christ!
That ever this should be!
Yea, slimy things did crawl with legs
Upon the slimy sea.

© Copyright 2001 Paul Weatherstone - All Rights Reserved
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2001-02-02 04:43 PM


Walter,
Long time no see!  Nice to come into the new forums and see another wonderful deep thinking one by you!!    Your thought processes have always amazed me hon!  
Isis


*War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.



laryalee
Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352
Alberta, Canada
2 posted 2001-02-03 09:43 PM


I will never look at fog the same again!
A great picture of emptiness, and to me it is also a searching....
Nicely done!
Lary

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