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Baby G
Junior Member

since 2001-01-28

Posts 39
Australia

0 posted 2001-02-02 02:19 AM

A tear drop falls,
when I think of you.
I feel deflated and miserable,
there is no cure for this sickness.
A tear drop falls,
when I see you.
You pretend I’m not there,
I’m all alone.
A tear drop falls,
when I speak of you.
Remembering your adorable grin,
that now ceases to exist.
I put an end to that.
A tear drop falls.
I feel like I have not only let myself down,
but you also.
You trusted me,
and I broke that barrier.
A tear drop falls.
I wish the ground would open up,
and take me into the darkness.
Then there wouldn’t be just nothingness,
there would be no light as well.
My teardrops fall.

Skoota
Junior Member

since 2000-12-23

Posts 28
Australia

1 posted 2001-02-02 02:46 AM

Very nice. *Grin*

See, I told you they'd like your poetry. *tickle*

Anyway, bravo etc. etc. I love it

Take care.

L Y

Sim

fractal007
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 1958

2 posted 2001-02-02 05:03 AM

This kind of thing can be very painful. You've expressed it very well. I hope that you will learn something from what you are going through, and then move on.

Temptress*Moon
Member

since 2001-01-15

Posts 240
Long Island, NY

3 posted 2001-02-02 07:31 PM

Familar Pain we share

Great write*S*
TemptressMoon

I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH-

Acies

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

4 posted 2001-02-03 05:16 PM

a lot of expression and hurt feelings you've expressed in this piece. keep you head up

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Caz
Member

since 2000-09-13

Posts 133
Concepción, Chile

5 posted 2001-02-03 08:54 PM

Wooow, a very heartfelt poem, it really touched deeply inside of me. I especially liked this part 'cause it relates to me...
"A tear drop falls,
when I think of you.
I feel deflated and miserable,
there is no cure for this sickness.
A tear drop falls,
when I see you.
You pretend I’m not there,
I’m all alone."
Thanks for sharing this excellent poem.
Your friend,
Caz

It's been raining since you left me.

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