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Dark_kisses_Within
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since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas

0 posted 2001-02-01 11:54 PM


I watch you as you lay alseep
I warm you when you begin to weep
I walk with you from the sky above
I fill you with my endless love
I stand with you when you are sad
I hold you close when it all seems bad
I whisper when life has you down
I smile with you without a frown
I am here for you through thick and thin
I never judge you on your sins
I help you through the longest days
I hold you up in many ways
I give you that sparkle in your eye
I wipe your tears when you cry
I make a path so you can see
I create your very own destiny
I am your *Angel*, this you will soon see
I am here for you throughout eternity



No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry



[This message has been edited by Dark_kisses_Within (edited 02-02-2001).]

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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2001-02-02 05:14 PM


Beautiful, hope he realises the angel he has at his side!!  
Isis

*War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.



Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
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Twilight Zone
2 posted 2001-02-02 05:28 PM


Beautiful poem, but I do have this feeling that the poem is for a child.  Am I wrong?  It's just that create your destiny line....pls tell  
thanks

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR



Temptress*Moon
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since 2001-01-15
Posts 240
Long Island, NY
3 posted 2001-02-02 07:07 PM


To beautiful for words*S*
TemptressMoon



I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH-

Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597

4 posted 2001-02-05 12:32 PM


Lovely way to start out month of Valentine,
Dark.  

laryalee
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since 2000-06-19
Posts 352
Alberta, Canada
5 posted 2001-02-05 08:55 PM


Like a soft and gentle angel's murmur...filled with faith...
Love it!
Lary

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