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A Broken Heart
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A Broken Heart |
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Baby G Junior Member
since 2001-01-28
Posts 39Australia |
I broke up with my boyfriend the other day, i think you'll get the rest...... The look on your face told me all. I knew at that very moment, I’d broken your heart. You did not speak, you did not try, but that look gave away a thousand emotions. I feel raw inside, knowing that I’ve hurt you. Wondering if you’ll ever forgive me, forgiveness will never be enough, we both know that. It will always be buried deep in both of us. Our friendship will never be the same, I hate myself for this. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Baby G, Great poem!. Don't hate yourself too much that the relationship broke up. It happens more often than you would know, just read the poems of others to see what I mean. write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Oh yes I agree with Keth on this one! Never hate yourself, there is a reason for everything. Good write, DkW No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Love's a pretty painful thing at times. But as long as you made the right choice, you should feel proud of yourself. I don't know if I would have had the courage to do that if I found myself in a relationship I did not wish to continue with... |
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Temptress*Moon Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 240Long Island, NY |
Sad  Love is a tough thing.. I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH- |
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