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Dark_kisses_Within
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since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas

0 posted 2001-01-30 07:25 AM


Walking along the beaches
Feeling the ocean's air
Noticing you in the distance
Realizing that I care
Not even knowing you
Yet wanting to somehow
Your walk in unbelievable
I must have you right now
Your eyes sparkle in the sun
They give off a promising glare
Watching you kick the sand
I cant help but to stare
You are everything I want
Everything I have dreamed
Your body is just perfect
And your deep brown eyes gleem
So, just take my hand in yours
Together we shall always be
Walking till the end of time
Into eternity we shall flee



No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry


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mystic requiem
Member
since 2001-01-26
Posts 144

1 posted 2001-01-30 10:02 AM


I have known that hunger!
Except, my babies eyes are blue.
Mmmmmmmmmmm
Great!
*S*

mYsTiC

firejerm
Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217
Springfield, OH, good ol USA
2 posted 2001-01-30 01:03 PM


Ahh, but the rebound be it fast.  The beach is a wonderful place to discover yourself, romance, and eternity...toss in a little mystery and you have your own private utopia.  Beautiful write.

Jerm

"Those little slices of death, how I loathe them."
-Edgar Allen Poe

Baby G
Junior Member
since 2001-01-28
Posts 39
Australia
3 posted 2001-02-01 01:32 AM


Another lovely poem!  Attraction can be so great that it can draw you into to pleasant and unpleasant places.  Everyone learns from it!
Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
4 posted 2001-02-02 12:35 PM


Thanx everyone!    And no its not a rebound thingy jigger  lol  its called *dreams*.


DkW

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