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firejerm
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since 2000-06-13
Posts 217
Springfield, OH, good ol USA

0 posted 2001-01-30 01:00 AM


Crucified for letting it go
You came to me from no where
Slicing my imagination
Yet showing me that you care,
Twilight turned to midnight
My eyes wide with wonder
Thoughts of you throughout me
And my fantasies begin to wander.
Visions of you in evil fashion
Grip my soul now you possess
Yet caressing my heart strings
With such sweetness and finess,
Cold rain stings me outside
When I stepped out to black
But when this night finally ends
I pray to passion you come back.
Rejuvination is no hyperbole
For your belief in me is real
The iron odor of lost blood dwindles
As these old wounds begin to heal,
Take my hand please don't let go
I need to feel your fragrant flesh
The heavy load gone from me
As each breath is now fresh.
The maddening screams I once heard
Drift out into the forever unknown
Bewildered in such a short time
By a feeling that's forever grown,
You made me find something lost
Which indeed for aeons had been gone
My smile flew back to me here
After living through all the wrongs.
The wind through the trees tonight
Pierces directly through my soul
But the chill does not effect me
For someone else the bell tolls,
You've abducted my free thoughts
I want to make love to your mind
Something infinte as this I feel
Can easily withstand aging time.
In parting with the sandman calling
It's my goal to make you see
That out of all the pain and insanity
I love you for finding me.

Jeremy T. Sellers
1/30/01  12:57 AM
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Sometimes Illusion(s) aren't that at all  
"Those little slices of death, how I loathe them."
-Edgar Allen Poe




[This message has been edited by firejerm (edited 01-30-2001).]

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Scarlet Lady
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since 2000-02-11
Posts 242
Midwest
1 posted 2001-01-30 03:28 AM


Breathless......speechless.......and in utter AWE of the "beauty of your heart" once again!  Such depth of emotion, along with  sincere devotion,  that I have yet to find.  I will always remember the night this  poem was given,  in such a SPECIAL way.  Thank you for the gift!  

[This message has been edited by Illusion (edited 01-30-2001).]

mystic requiem
Member
since 2001-01-26
Posts 144

2 posted 2001-01-30 10:34 AM


Excellent piece.
Shows quality.
Please write me.
I would like to invite
you to my private forum.
*thanx*

mYsTiC

Temptress*Moon
Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 240
Long Island, NY
3 posted 2001-01-30 07:01 PM


you have such a way with words  
Temp!  


I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH-

Krawdad
Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597

4 posted 2001-01-30 11:41 PM


Dramatic "invitation" of sorts.
Compellingly done.

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