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Loneliness |
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strangeh2o New Member
since 2001-01-18
Posts 6 |
You never thought you'd make it this far with no one by your side. You never thought you'd have to give in and swallow all your pride. It's hard to see the future when you're not happy with the past. and it's hard to see a happy ending when nothing seems to last. Your life at this point seems to really be a mess. Loneliness. Sometimes it's not too hard to do, getting in touch with yourself. Sometimes it feels like there's no way you'll ever trust anyone else. Sometimes that's a good thing. It can start to help you grow. Sometimes it's a bad thing, but that's what's hard to know. Sometimes it can really seem to cause a lot of stress, and loneliness. You look for someone special but it has to be someone that fits. 'cause sometimes things look special but they'll blow your world to bits. You've lived it many times but you've never had it right. Surely someone somewhere can help you through the night. You dream about a helping hand with a slow, soft caress. Loneliness. The spirits are all at work. The angels are all on your side. Come out and watch the world spin, Don't run away and hide. You can learn about forgiveness. You can learn about your mind. You can even take advantage of all the things you find. You can learn the reason why it seems like you obsess on loneliness. It's time to make a change. The stars are all in place. The future will be different but the past can't be erased. I hope you've learned your lessons and I hope you've learned them well. I hope you never have to spend another moment in hell. I hope you never again have to deal with distress, or loneliness. Jerry |
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Baby G Junior Member
since 2001-01-28
Posts 39Australia |
Fantastic poem, it expresses loneliness so well. Well done! |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Great poem here! So well said and expressed! Mags No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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armanca Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 211Tennessee |
I always love seeing your poetry. I see so much talent there, and I always see you in there. Carman |
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strangeh2o New Member
since 2001-01-18
Posts 6 |
Thank you all for your posts. I appreciate it a lot. This forum has so many great poems posted in it. I'm glad to get to put mine in among them. Jerry |
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