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He
Junior Member

since 2001-01-15

Posts 41

0 posted 2001-01-28 02:06 PM

She

  the morning

    forevers dawn

          light
    awaken
        heart
     her souls
    illumination
          revealing

       free

  to see
    to breathe

      at last
to birth the dream

   coffined
cold

arise
  Lazarus

     my heart
      soul

         alive

  warmed within
    nightless love

She

the sunrise

   She

      the dawn

     She

        the light
           that is


        life

Heaven born



"Emotion revealed as the ocean maid..."

mystic requiem
Member

since 2001-01-26

Posts 144

1 posted 2001-01-28 02:11 PM

Simply wonderful in it's flow!
*thanx*

mYsTiC

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

2 posted 2001-01-28 03:50 PM

What did I say before...?

It's light, airy and it dances...(and I am trying to get used to the apostrophe thing...heh)

and of course: I adore it..

thank you, my word dancer

K

[This message has been edited by Severn (edited 01-28-2001).]

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2001-01-28 04:06 PM

GOOSEBUMPS...lol...not kidding...looking at them right now...

and K? "worddancer" is a very apt description....

Ginners
Member

since 2000-07-22

Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey

4 posted 2001-01-29 05:27 PM

beautiful, i love the way it flows and the light and airy feel of it and i agree 'worddancer' is good

"I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN
"There is no always forever, just this"-the cure

dragonpoe
Senior Member

since 2000-11-12

Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida

5 posted 2001-01-29 05:33 PM

Very orginal with a unique flow that really gives it a personal touch. Great read.

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

Celeste
Senior Member

since 2000-11-11

Posts 597

6 posted 2001-02-04 09:04 PM

Beautiful writing. Beautiful style.

To capture and live a moment is truly living

Jannel
Member

since 2000-01-18

Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA

7 posted 2001-02-04 09:31 PM

i like. the words dance and sing...

wandering
Member

since 2001-01-21

Posts 92

8 posted 2001-02-05 09:20 PM

very nicely done. i'll belooking for more. thanks for the read

lost in thought, found in words.
wanderer

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