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Scarlet Lady
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since 2000-02-11
Posts 242
Midwest

0 posted 2001-01-27 11:01 PM



what they wanted

she came to live for them......

so they thought,
then she fought!
her life at stake,
they lived to take!

she would feel her death, so close at hand
no one else would stop, to lend her their band

so she searched on in vain
with deep heart felt pain
all alone she would travel
as she watched her life unravel

no one would come to call
and this lady,  she DID fall
from the grace of former years
with painstaking wrenching tears
now nothing is left to say
for with her "life",  she did pay

© Copyright 2001 Lynne - All Rights Reserved
firejerm
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since 2000-06-13
Posts 217
Springfield, OH, good ol USA
1 posted 2001-01-28 02:40 AM


Your material is really growing on me.  I've noticed much of it is like an emotional roller coaster, but yet I still keep coming back.  Good work here...Going to read more...brb.. he he he

Jeremy

"Those little slices of death, how I loathe them."
-Edgar Allen Poe

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