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Scarlet Lady
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since 2000-02-11
Posts 242
Midwest

0 posted 2001-01-27 10:38 PM



no feeling
  does
      arise

to meet
   a strangers eye

  the      BLUE
     iciness
in this cool room

   ~~misting~~
as  "it"  looms

they glance
       for the
           stare??
  
their hearts
  *never*
SEE    care  

as they lift their mask
     to create
    an ugly task

they know
   all too well

*infatuations*
  lying spell

in a web
   they are
      strangely
           caught

  by     this
    allure
  which "they"
    sought

and now
   the chains
          are set

in a hell
    they circumvent

tomorrow
   does not
      look bright

for
darkness
      blinded
         their sight

come to the reality
         of what is true

they can't............
    it makes them
              to see
                   the color BLUE!





[This message has been edited by Illusion (edited 01-27-2001).]

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firejerm
Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217
Springfield, OH, good ol USA
1 posted 2001-01-28 02:43 AM


I may be wrong here, but this nearly sounds like someone who is regretting a one night stand, caught up in a world of infatuation, knowing going into it that it is wrong.  Yet succumbing anyway.  Maybe I'm wrong, regardless I liked it.

Jeremy

"Those little slices of death, how I loathe them."
-Edgar Allen Poe

mystic requiem
Member
since 2001-01-26
Posts 144

2 posted 2001-01-28 02:50 PM


It is easy to fall prey to infatuations.
Everyone enjoys pleasure.
And the pleasure of
lust is no stranger to any of us.
Unfortunately, there is always a price to pay.
Good!
*thanx*

mYsTiC

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