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Dark_kisses_Within
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since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas

0 posted 2001-01-27 01:14 AM


I have searched many mountains
And walked the ocean shores
Looking for my soul mate
While opening many doors
Climbing many trees
Searching high into the sky
Looking for my soul mate
Yet not looking for the lies
I have wished upon the first star
Praying with all my might
Looking for my soul mate
Bringing brightness to my sight
I have cried many tears
On this crazy road that whinds
Looking for my soul mate
Inwhich I can never find


No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry


© Copyright 2001 Mags - All Rights Reserved
Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597

1 posted 2001-01-27 02:20 AM


She searches many places
and looks at many faces
He doesn't seem to be where
she would like for him to share
And so on and on she goes
in her darkness and her throes

mystic requiem
Member
since 2001-01-26
Posts 144

2 posted 2001-01-27 11:06 AM


Ahhhhhh, that infamous search for the soul mate.
I especially like the portion of wishing on the star.
A little nugget tucked in there. Good!
*S*

mYsTiC

firejerm
Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217
Springfield, OH, good ol USA
3 posted 2001-01-28 02:22 AM


You know if you would keep him on the "up and up", it's not that hard to find.

Jeremy

"Those little slices of death, how I loathe them."
-Edgar Allen Poe

Baby G
Junior Member
since 2001-01-28
Posts 39
Australia
4 posted 2001-01-29 04:20 AM


By your poem I gather you believe we all have soul mates??  Well I certainly hope you find yours.  Lovely poem!
Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
5 posted 2001-01-30 11:42 AM


Thanx ya'll for your replies. And YES Baby G, I do believe in soul mates! And ummm Jeremy.... I am on the * up and up*.  I just have trouble finding someone that has total trust in me!  Sad but true!  
Anyways, thanx again everyone.

Mags


No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry


Ginners
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since 2000-07-22
Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey
6 posted 2001-01-30 01:04 PM


very good, i too believe in soul mates, but the sad thing is that it may take an eternity and several different lives to find yours, but never give up the search
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