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Broken
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since 2000-03-12
Posts 271
The woods

0 posted 2001-01-26 04:03 PM



MORTAL

No kind of sensation is keener,
and more active than that of pain.
It's impressions are unmistakeable!

I leave this ode splendid,
undone and mortal.
Hence I sourrender to the carnage.


Oh God! Why the angels fall first?

© Copyright 2001 Jay Hartson - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2001-01-27 12:40 PM


Broken,
don't ever surrender and don't give up. Black and frightening write.
Write on
Kethry.


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



mystic requiem
Member
since 2001-01-26
Posts 144

2 posted 2001-01-27 11:17 AM


Yea baby! You got it. Now that's dark.
GREAT!
*S*

mYsTiC

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258
meet Morgana
3 posted 2001-02-13 04:11 PM


Wow, I've missed you so much. Reading your words reminded me of that. Do you remember me? I thought you had left a long time ago. This is very late but I wanted to reply to it anyway. I loved your poem, you've got a natural talent for writing and expression. Don't ever give in though, it would break my heart. The fight may be hard, but you'll find your way. I know you will.

I am no one if not myself.

Angel of Darkness



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