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Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
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Escondido-California

0 posted 2001-01-26 02:16 PM



The Time Has Come To Say Goodbye My Love


I caught a true glimpse of your essence today,
my heart came to resolve much,
seeing with eyes wide open I found to not like
what I saw.

I thought my feelings for you would never end,
but I was mistaken, blinded by
my miss understanding of the floundering love
I possessed for you.

Our separateness has proved to be worthwhile
on my behalf, for I have grown,
but you lay stagnate in your mire, giving my
senses reason to say farewell.  

You’re needing for capsizing waves of turmoil
and the never ending passion
for self pity, reliance’s on others abilities instead
of producing your own sure
footing have become evident in your aura.

I will always be proud of what once was, I have
always maintained loving kindness
towards your soul knowing my understandings,
but my hearts eye’s see differently now.

I am growing and wish to keep moving forward
in knowledge and gained wisdom
as it’s result. The floundering love I possessed for
you was holding me back from
understanding my full potential leaving only
one remaining act.

There is apart of you that remains with me
always, but is the part of you
that I loved and was content with in that era
and I will never forsake the
loving memories.

The point in time has arrived for
me to emotionally untie the heart strings and
with a comfortableness of sound
mind and heart I do this with utter willingness.  

“The time has come to say goodbye my love”

By, Cerenity




"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2001-01-26 02:25 PM


Very interesting...what if someone could achieve their goal to love someone and they realized they had fallen in love with the wrong person.  So they gather up their strength and decide to move on...James
Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
2 posted 2001-01-26 03:39 PM


Maybe this will explain my reasoning in this piece,

In the past few weeks with the passing of a loved one, and the grave illness of our daughter, I was put into a position that required maintaining the same space as my ex-husband. Over the past few years I have found it difficult to come to a satisfying ending of that part of my life, but was granted the chance to come to a complete understanding of my feelings in regards to it. I now feel that I can once and for all with wisdom and happiness put it in it’s proper place. In some cases a divorce is not the end of feelings for someone or does hate of any kind have to be present in the separating of two people. I have
been able to look at things through interactions or us talking and feel that with my own confidence I can
now move on and close a chapter in my life and I will be OK and feel no ill will towards the other.

Thank you James, good question! im not entirely sure how to answer you.

Love, cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
3 posted 2001-01-26 11:38 PM


Cerenity,
What an honest and brave write, I'm so glad you could reconcile your feelings for your ex. even though it took a difficult situation to do it.I hope things go well for you
write on
Keth


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



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