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Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member

since 2000-03-21

Posts 680
Kansas

0 posted 2001-01-26 01:08 AM

I gave you my heart
For all the world to see
I only wanted to love you
And set my past free
I gave you many smiles
To paste upon your wall
I just needed a ladder
Incase I was about to fall
I gave you my soul
To hold it very tight
I just needed someone to hug
When I woke up in a fright
I gave you alot of laughter
To brighten up your day
I just wanted your attention
In the little words you say

I guess I gave you many reasons
To walk away from me
I understand your thoughts
And the things that have to be
The sun shall shine tomorrow
As it did this very day
But I lost the love of my life
And for this I have to pay

No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry

firecrakker
Member

since 2000-10-20

Posts 235
Virginia

1 posted 2001-01-26 10:46 AM

DkW,
I can't believe how close this is to experiences in my own past life.. and I don't know if this is something you've recently gone through or from your own past.. but, one thing I do know.. it takes 2. It sounds like you're shouldering guilt that isn't yours... Good luck, either way, and great write!

Sheila

Temptress*Moon
Member

since 2001-01-15

Posts 240
Long Island, NY

2 posted 2001-01-26 07:03 PM

Similar experience we both have i see....and yes it is hard to love someone after coming from a HELL
Relationship, it's been almost 3 years...and the WRong way that i have learned to love, Messes everything up when i try to go into a relationship

But still i try, but i whind up hurting the other

This was a great poem

And good luck to you to*S*
TemptressMoon

I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH-

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

3 posted 2001-01-26 07:19 PM

Yea i can definatly relate to this one--great work--LOVE ELMO <3

LOVE ELMO <3

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

4 posted 2001-01-27 12:17 PM

Sad song, Dark, but well sung. There is a generous lover here.
Hope a two way street is just around the next corner.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

5 posted 2001-01-27 12:51 PM

DKW,
Whether it works or it doesn't there are always regrets so *HuGS*.
I liked this and I could relate.
Keth.

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

firejerm
Member

since 2000-06-13

Posts 217
Springfield, OH, good ol USA

6 posted 2001-01-28 02:24 AM

Sometimes as much as we want to love someone, we still find reasons to push them away or leave them in the dark. Yet we don't know why we do it.

"Those little slices of death, how I loathe them."
-Edgar Allen Poe

Scarlet Lady
Member

since 2000-02-11

Posts 242
Midwest

7 posted 2001-01-28 03:18 AM

Gosh girl.....why do I feel like......I want to mend what has been broken in you. You put it into words so wonderously, yet I can see you pushing away what you truly want because of fear? I could be wrong? I think I have caught a glimpse of someone who may care....then I do the same and retract......hell girl "GO FOR IT!" WHAT ELSE DO YOU HAVE TO LOOSE? ooooops just had to get that out....sorry!!

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

8 posted 2001-01-28 04:18 PM

Well written, sadly beautiful, do I ever relate. ~Hugs~

Take care,
Melissa

The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams

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