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Bee Junior Member
since 2000-11-23
Posts 23Ireland |
Spiritual Child Last night heard you crying I rocked and carressed you In my arms you were lying Safely I held you (my sweet little beauty) Oh, to look in your eyes Wide open with fear I don't want to die Want to be with you here (my sweet little angel) Sweetly you smelled Cheeks like ruby red wine Wrapped in my dreams Your tears were all mine (my sweet little darling) Flooded in tears Your insincere daddy He's caught in his fears To act and be happy He'll never rock you Or know you have tickles Never he'll hold you Or hear your soft giggles Caused so much affliction Pain, tears and sorrow To find our destination ...life's only borrowed (a short while sometimes) I could not explain it Couldn't say why There was no reason To let go and be shy Hush, hush now, my baby Gone is all pain You'll lie warm and safely In the grave of my brain For Nuala, in memoriam. |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Beautiful write here!! Very loving and sincere! Mags No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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silentsky Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 114 |
its been a while since ive replyed to anything but reading this i felt the beauty of the emotion and the last line was so strong that it pulled me in...and i felt a strong connection to the person having written it, which would be you. its funny that so much of my poetry has been about the child within me and this is too, but in a completely different way. its a beautiful poem. thank you, shira. |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Bee, Tough thing to write about, but you've done it well. Thanks for sharing. |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
the impression that I get from this piece gives me chills. Very sorrowful. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
this was wonderful i really enjoyed it "I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN "There is no always forever, just this"-the cure |
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Bee Junior Member
since 2000-11-23
Posts 23Ireland |
Dear Mags, Krawdad, D-poe, ginners! Thanks for your time reading this and your replies. I felt you all responded to my write in a personal way. Especially to you Shira: It is strange how a spiritual connection can be made, even over the internet. What touched you is probably the part of that spiritual child that belongs to you. At the time I wrote these lines, I felt a geat loss of what I didn't have. Two years later I feel very different, knowing it is still out there in you and me and maybe the subconscious of others. If you allow it to become reality, it can be conceived and born. But sometimes people miss the right time for that and mourn for the rest of their existence or settle with a surrogate. |
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