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Standard Disaster
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firejerm Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217Springfield, OH, good ol USA |
A cold night spent alone Still wondering why If the emotion is gone Just please say goodbye, You've left it open And you've walked away Turned your back Without a word to say. The thought of me Is least in your mind But don't drag this on For any length of time, Give me an answer So I can move on Since this deteriorated Going horribly wrong I send you my thoughts To let you know it's there But you shrug them off As if you don't even care. Days go by for me Without a word To let you hurt me like this Is completely absurd No explanation to me Just an offline frown These last few days I've felt so down, However I must rebound For it is not recipricated You see for love to work Two must have participated I guess I'll walk away And be the better one What was this to you Just some sort of sick fun? As life goes on I'm learning faster and faster Letting your heart go Is just a standard disaster  Jeremy T. Sellers 1/25/01 1:18 AM This just off the top of my head, take it at face value. "Those little slices of death, how I loathe them." -Edgar Allen Poe |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Hmmm... a touching poem. A lot of emotion wrapped into this... sadness, anger, hurt, love, hate. You've written it well Jeremy  Hope you're okay. Take care!~ Tara ~ may you live all the days of your life. -- jonathan swift |
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armanca Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 211Tennessee |
Jeremy... I decided to check out your work after i recieved a reply from you. And I suppose i'm opposite from you, I tend to like freeverse style. But When i read this one... I was write there with you. I'm dealing with something along those lines. To be able to bow out gracefully... that is the decision (and easier said than done) Carman |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
This so sad and very good, i know this feeling well |
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firecrakker Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235Virginia |
Jeremy, I know how the unknown can wreak such havoc on your heart... I hope you find your answers. Great piece! Sheila |
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