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Come Back to me
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Come Back to me |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
I wish there were some way to show How much I care before you go But the one thing I don’t have is time So I’ll put my thoughts down in this rhyme And let you know what I could be If only you’d come back to me I’ll love you once, I’ll love you twice I’ll love you soft, I’ll love you nice I’ll love you like no one before I’ll love you ‘till I live no more A love so strong I’ll give to thee The day that you come back to me I know these words you’ve heard before But it’s only you that I adore God how I hate to let you go Because Jeanette I love you so I’ll write a verse or two or three With hopes that you’ll come back to me I prey these thoughts to you are clear I only want to keep you near To my heart and mind and soul Because with you I loose control Of deep and powerful feelings you see Which beg you to come back to me My heart goes with you on this flight And my soul will be there every night Until the day that you return Because in time I know you’ll learn That my love is only meant for thee So please my dear come back to me G. A. Webb Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
aw... How moving. Good write. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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ThyWizard Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 56Chambersburg, PA, USA |
I feel you dude... truly. Great piece, i agree, it was absolutely moving. rock on man...with pieces like that i hope she comes back to ya  " How can i feel if i can't breathe..." - Godsmack |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
That was so beautiful!! I hope she does come back  Mags No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Very nice... so much heart in this one, the poem bleeds - if I can put it that way! Take care!~ Tara ~ may you live all the days of your life. -- jonathan swift |
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He Junior Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 41 |
Your longing shows through, Perhaps her ears will harken to your call. You have stated in emotions strong. |
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firecrakker Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235Virginia |
Wow... Simple and heartfelt. She'd have to have a pretty strong will to resist this one. Sheila |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
dragonpoe: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.  ThyWizard & Dark_kisses_Within: Thank you both! I too hope she comes back, we'll see, wish me luck! taramw: Ya, you can put it that way, I liked it...lol. Thank you! He: Thanks, I don't think I could have made it any clearer than I did. Time will tell if she dose in fact harken my call or not, wish me luck. firecrakker: Ya, I suppose she would have to be pritty strong to resist this. But the sad truth of the matter is, that my writings only seems to effect those who they were not aimed at. You'd be surprized at some of the things that I've written for people that were just simple blown off or seen as nothing more than a bunch of pritty words all strewn together. Only time and effort will tell weather or not I actually got through to this woman. I've been fooled in the past and have desire to be made a fool of again. But something inside tells that this one is worth the effort, so I'll do it, gladly. After all, like I always say, "When there's a Webb, there's a way"...hehe! Wish me luck! Thanks! Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Awe this is sweet--I'm trying to get my boyfriend to come back to me--Sunday would have been 1 year & 8 months for us  --great poem LOVE ELMO <3 |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
G A Webb, I hope she does come back, but if she doesn't you're sure to catch another with the charming words you write...provided your actions match your words. Write on Keth Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Jeanette, wherever you are, come back, come back, this poor Joe needs you so!!! |
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mystic requiem Member
since 2001-01-26
Posts 144 |
Well, if she doesn't come back, she is certainly missing out big time! A well woven mesh of thoughts. Good! *S*   mYsTiC |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
qtpieelmo: Wow, a year and 8 months huh...that a long time. It's only been 1 month for me and she had to leave because her visa ran out. But I'm going to England in April and hopefully I'll be able to convince her to come back then...hopefully. Wish me luck! Thank you! Kethry: Thank you. Don't worry, my actions speak far louder than my words. I believe that talk is cheap unless you are willing to back it up with equally strong actions. So I do just that. Thanks again. Krawdad: YA! COME BACK! COME BACK! PLEASE!!!...LOL! Thanks! mystic requiem: Ya think so...thanks. G Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't |
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