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Dark Poetry #3

Little Bit of Sisters

AniKay83
Member

since 2000-06-28

Posts 388
Missing Since 1999

0 posted 2001-01-23 02:02 PM

Hey there little sister,
Why do you always have to cry?
Pulling smears of mascara
from your big blue beaten eyes.
I don't understand you little sister,
Cursing boys with your voodoo
Turning his picture upside down
with a poison kiss from you.
I can't stand you little sister,
All that attention that you need.
I was a mess of hearts and hell,
and you let your metal madness bleed.
I can't forget you little sister,
but I guess I could forgive.
Even though you never noticed,
sometimes you made it hard to live.
I love my little sister,
you're the reason why I love me.
It took more than blood, as well as none,
to make us family.

"Hearts will become practical when they make them unbreakable"
~The Wizard of Oz
Much love all,
Krissie

ma miller
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 806

1 posted 2001-01-24 09:14 AM

AniKay83 ... this is a very brave and honest work ... i'd have a hard time mustering up the strength to pull this off ... well done...

dragonpoe
Senior Member

since 2000-11-12

Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida

2 posted 2001-01-24 03:33 PM

very deep.

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

AniKay83
Member

since 2000-06-28

Posts 388
Missing Since 1999

3 posted 2001-01-24 06:34 PM

MA Miller~ I was typing this and I kept going back and deleting certain lines because although it was what I had written it was not what I was feeling. Someone once said to me they couldn't write poetry because they don't want to write anything personal. I told them if it isn't personal it isn't poetry. I find it odd that I was typing something else and lying to myself, but finally I penned this finished copy, full of brutal honesty. Thanks so much for your reply.

dragonpoe~ Thanks for reading!

"Hearts will become practical when they make them unbreakable"
~The Wizard of Oz
Much love all,
Krissie

mirror man
Senior Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 814

4 posted 2001-01-24 06:43 PM

This is good.

AniKay83
Member

since 2000-06-28

Posts 388
Missing Since 1999

5 posted 2001-01-24 10:20 PM

Thanks a lot.

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