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sgreybe
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since 2000-04-28
Posts 209
London, UK

0 posted 2001-01-23 05:31 AM


PASSIONATE FRIEND:

From an impossible night
A never-again stance
Came an overpowering light
And a knowing glance

Once before I saw it there
The same feelings known
Yet, that time, not shared
A one-way, cold stone

  But you knew me
  And you felt me
  Shared my pain
  Felt it again
  Held me tight
  Made it alright

You and I
In a dream to last
Lifting us up
Together, the past
Is nothing and none
For by your side
My life has begun
Hope's revived

THEN...

In the darkness of hell
Painful words spoke
To bid farewell
From the dream awoke

To never again
Be where I belong
Passionate friend
You're forever gone.

© Copyright 2001 Sylvia Greybe - All Rights Reserved
taramw
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

1 posted 2001-01-24 03:58 AM


Hmm... sad - written well.  

~ Tara ~


may you live all the days of your life. -- jonathan swift

Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
2 posted 2001-01-24 01:26 PM


Yes indeed, very sadly written. Very well expressions here though AND never give up hope!  

Mags  


No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry


Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597

3 posted 2001-01-25 12:42 PM


"To bid farewell . . .
You're forever gone"

What can you do about this, except write the poem . . .
Thanks for sharing.

firejerm
Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217
Springfield, OH, good ol USA
4 posted 2001-01-25 01:36 AM


They tell you not to give up hope, but I tell you what, sometimes it's GOOD to take an intermission.  Good work here, and I look forward to reading more.

Jeremy

"Those little slices of death, how I loathe them."
-Edgar Allen Poe

Ginners
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since 2000-07-22
Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey
5 posted 2001-01-25 01:02 PM


Enjoyed reading this very much
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